Sentence examples for drafts of this report from inspiring English sources

Many comments were made to earlier drafts of this Report, especially those from Ms. Be Thi Hong Van, Ms. Tran Chi Mai, and Ms. Nguyen Thu Thao (CEMA), and Ms. Nguyen Thi Van Anh, Ms. Yoshimi Nishino, MsMs.

Previous drafts of this report included such discussion.

Thank you also to Professor Karin Lines for providing constructive feedback on drafts of this report.

I am indebted to Kostas Stamoulis, William Meyers and Antonio Yunes for their valuable insights and suggestions on earlier drafts of this report.

From the various comments on early drafts of this report, it became clear that there was a need to bring in more strongly an analysis of the architecture and management structure of the co-lead arrangement as a whole and around the mainstreaming of Cluster responsibilities within the two agencies.

Rose wrote in his column on 14 September: As recently as October 2012, in an earlier draft of this report, the IPCC was adamant that the world is warmer than at any time for at least 1,300 years.

"I think, because of what we know was in the original first draft of this report, irrespective of what is produced on Tuesday, we know that if the parties accept this report in general they are accepting Heathrow expansion," he said.

Iain Chalmers, Dave Sackett, Mike Clarke and Paul Glasziou provided helpful feedback on a draft of this report.

We thank Michael Prentice for his advice and comments on the final draft of this report.

BY designed and implemented the project, and wrote the first draft of this report.

ML wrote the first draft of this report; all authors revised the draft of the report and approved its final version.