Sentence examples for drafts of paper from inspiring English sources

PM commented on drafts of paper.

Critical comments on drafts of paper.

Reviewed and commented on drafts of paper.

CR coordinated data collection, wrote first draft and revisions of the paper, corresponding author; IF reviewed drafts of paper; HFR assisted with data collection, reviewed drafts of paper.

LS: critical review of drafts of paper, approval of final draft.

AD was involved in the coordination of the KORA study and commented on drafts of paper.

Draft of paper: LZ.

CP wrote the first draft of paper.

Serena O'Neil contributed to data analysis and drafting of paper.

JH: Study Chief Investigator, designed study, contributed to data interpretation, contributed to drafting of paper.

Philipp Emicke contributed to gel image and mass spectrometry analyses, statistical analyses, and drafting of paper.