My draft line was "Cohen has long made his rent in France," but Bob's got a more thorough take.
Known for combing through an author's draft line by line, Mr. McDonald even has a hand in designing the cover of many of the books he edits, and he often plays a role in planning a book's marketing.
"So life is simply from minute to minute of horror," he wrote to Virginia Woolf the following month, perhaps hearing a draft line of poetry forming itself somewhere in his mind.
I remember the dinners I missed while going through rounds after arounds of editing a paper with Tom, or more accurately, of Tom rewriting the entire draft line by line by hand, in his Coverian large font on pads of yellow college-ruled paper.
"He took down a whole bookful of notes based on our reactions ["our" meaning Mr. Freudenberg, Miss Cattaneo and Mr. Hambleton, who had gone over the script together] and quickly came up with a newer, stronger version". Then Mr. Freudenberg and Mr. D'Andrea went over the new draft, line by line, clarifying and pruning.
After weeks of effort, Liu says, he was still struggling, so Roizman spent 2 days going through the draft line by line, improving the manuscript and helping develop Liu's writing skills.
An over-draft line of credit of $15,000-20,00015,000-20,000excellent cushion to fanl back on.
As you ride in a pack or drafting line, try to ride smoothly--avoid abrupt changes in speed to keep the line together and functioning efficiently.
The second rider in a drafting line uses about 23% less energy than the lead rider, the third and subsequent riders use about 33% less energy than the lead rider.
