Matt agrees, "No essay suggestions or drafting suggestions from you.
Right now, we have policy groups working with our more than 50 local branches to draft practical suggestions for real change.
He drafted a suggestion for an amendment arguing that the laws against slavery were formulated in such a way that it presupposed that violent conquest would still be carried out, and he encouraged once again beginning a phase of peaceful colonization by peasants instead of soldiers.
CH designed and planned the study, collected and assembled data, supervised analyses, interpreted the results, wrote sections of the initial draft, provided substantive suggestions for revision and critically reviewed later drafts, provided study materials and patients, obtained funding, and provided administrative, technical, and logistical support.
Both BH and HQ reviewed several drafts and made suggestions for revision.
The feedback on this draft mainly concerned suggestions for improvements in detail.
AM: Interpreted the results; wrote sections of the initial draft; provided substantive suggestions for revision or critically reviewed subsequent iterations of the manuscript; provided administrative, logistical, and technical support.
Deliberation: Review the draft of a conceptual model and set of measurement tools for enhancing an interprofessional approach to SDM in primary healthcare, and pursue deliberations over the draft to seek suggestions for clarification and/or improvements to be made on the proposed conceptual model.
Unfortunately the FDA representatives stayed only long enough to give their own opening presentations and respond to specific questions arising from those presentations but left before the following talks by ISOQOL members with lifetimes of experience of working with PROs providing feedback on the draft guidelines and suggestions for improvements.
Be sure to say that it is a rough draft and encourage suggestions for improvement.
