While the Scribd communications team expressed their concern to Goldman and invited him to the office when he sent them a pre-publication draft of the post, there was no apology, until today.
The handwritten draft of the post-discharge treatment plan contains every addressed need with a precise problem definition, objectives, time-frame regarding goal attainment and persons responsible for the implementation.
As we approach the Millennium Development Goal deadline, and as discussions and drafting of the post-2015 Development Agenda are under way, new ideas and approaches are required to tackle the unfinished business and to ensure that all obligations made under the Convention are upheld".
They were not consulted in the drafting of the first post-apartheid mental health policy in the influential "White paper for the transformation of the health system in South Africa", adopted in 1997.
Dr. Tabor, a medical researcher, drafts most of the posts himself, using some marketing techniques learned from his successful diet business, which he now pitches on QVC.
*Note: Due to a technical problem, an incomplete, unedited draft of this post was published in place of the final, edited version for some time.
After I sent Professor Cutler a draft of this post, he responded: "When I was giving my testimony, I was excluding the vast bulk of policies that will affect part-time work, job choice, etc., because I wanted to focus on the overall cost issue.
Thanks to Andy Dunn and Philip Krim for reviewing early drafts of this post.
[A note of thanks to Eghosa Omoigui, Josh Elman, and Micah Baldwin for reading drafts of this post.].
Correction*: In my original draft of this post, I wrote that Armen Petrosian was a chief executive officer of Xatori.
(ps – thanks to many women who helped proofread early drafts of this post… most of whom I didn't listen to about how to make it better / more effective.
