Another 181 changes either exaggerated or emphasized scientific uncertainties, such as changing "will" to "may" in the draft sentence "Warming temperatures will also affect Arctic land areas".
(She's attracted to the freedom that comes with a multi-platform definition of writing because she doesn't have the patience to draft sentences until they're perfect, preferring the spontaneity of capturing unplanned beauty on camera).
At least for me, they don't serve the sound of a drafted sentence as well as flat-out substitutes, pro-tem inventions.
Rogers, the second pick in the 2003 draft, was sentenced to 93 days in jail in January for violating a court order to stay sober.
C.I.A. analysts drafted four sentences describing "demonstrations" in Benghazi that were "spontaneously inspired" by protests in Cairo against a crude video lampooning the Prophet Muhammad.
But at some point during the bill's drafting, a sentence was slipped in that gives a regulator powers to act against sites "making prohibited material available on the internet to persons in the United Kingdom" – a clause that has somehow escaped any debate.
In a brief statement, the supreme court said: "The issues in this appeal were whether the proposed civil legal aid residence test in the draft Legal Aid, Sentencing and Punishment of Offenders Act (Amendment of Schedule 1) Order 2014 is ultra vires [beyond the powers of the legislation] and unjustifiably discriminatory and so in breach of common law and the Human Rights Act 1998.
He was convicted of draft evasion and sentenced to five years in prison, a sentence subsequently overturned by the Supreme Court, after Ali endured four years in internal exile and a legal battle tougher than fighting Liston, Joe Frazier and George Foreman combined.
This is a good time to make a reverse outline: working off your first draft, write a sentence or two for each scene or chapter.
