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The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1471-2415/12/9/prepub Editorial support, including contributing to the first draft, revising the paper based on author feedback, and styling the paper for journal submission, was provided by Linda Whetter, DVM, PhD, of Zola Associates and was funded by Pfizer Inc.

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GO wrote a first draft, revised by BC and WVD.

GCF designed the study, analysed and interpreted data, helped to draft, revised and approved the manuscript.

CV Participated in the design of the manuscript, helped draft, revise and critically appraise manuscript content.

All authors contributed to the development of the draft, revised, and final manuscript.

DU carried out analysis, helped draft, revise, and polish the manuscript and coordinated the project.

AJB assisted with drafting, revising and editing the manuscript.

Involved in drafting, revising, or critiquing the manuscript: Diero, Tierney.

MPP developed study design, supervised conduction of study, assisted in drafting, revising, and editing manuscript.