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The original draft of this work goes back to the young friar's first stay in Naples, from 1590 to 1592.

All authors have approved the final draft of this work for publication.

FS performed the calculations and wrote a draft of this work.

We are also grateful to Val Curtis (LSHTM) and the reviewers for comments on an earlier draft of this work.

We would also like to acknowledge and thank Dr Mandy Scheermesser and Dr Kees Boersma for their useful and constructive feedback on an earlier draft of this work.

The authors are indebted to Drs. Jason Addison and Craig Schneider for reading an earlier draft of this work and for helpful comments from anonymous reviewers.

We would like to thank two anonymous reviewers for helpful comments on earlier drafts of this work.

We would like to thank Ellie Happel, Peter Kostishack, Michael Valqui, Tim Killeen, Nigel Pitman, and two anonymous reviewers for helpful comments on earlier drafts of this work.

MLS and RH took part in data collection as part of the original WHI and contributed substantially to final drafts of this work.

The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1472-698X/9/15/prepub The authors wish to thank Jocalyn Clark for her helpful feedback and guidance on earlier drafts of this work.

The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1472-698X/9/18/prepub The authors wish to thank Jocalyn Clark and James V. Lavery for their helpful feedback and guidance on earlier drafts of this work.