In an early draft of the introduction, which Flew shared with Carrier, and Carrier with me, Flew identifies himself as a deist, but in the published version, that passage has been deleted.
See also the First draft of The Introduction to the Principles, which differs in important ways from the published version (Berkeley 1948-57, 2: 121-145).
First, Kant always defines pleasure as a state of mind connected with a disposition toward its own continuation, and in the first draft of the Introduction to the third Critique he adds that pleasure is a ground "for producing its object" (First Introduction to CPJ, section VIII, 20 230 1).
CNW prepared the initial draft of the Introduction and Discussion sections.
Mark Genovese and Edward Keystone wrote the first draft of the introduction and discussion with additional comments provided by Peter Taylor.
DSC is the main investigator of the cohort, wrote the first draft of the introduction and of the discussion of the manuscript.
CDW wrote the first draft of the introduction and literature review, AG and AS the first draft of the methods and MS, JP and SW undertook the analyses.
DC wrote the subsections related to 'Growth Plate Injury' as well as developing the first draft of the 'Introduction' and 'Conclusion' sections.
RJ was responsible for overall design of the study, obtained funding, and co-led the focus groups with CO, wrote the first drafts of the introduction and discussion, and subsequent drafts of the overall paper.
Ernest Volinn participated in the strategy for the data analysis, assisted in the data interpretation, wrote the first drafts of the introduction and discussion sections, read and commented on each draft.
