Sentence examples for draft of the revision from inspiring English sources

An initial draft of the revision, released in July 2014, was widely panned by human rights experts and civil society groups as a dramatic rollback of the bank's standards.

The current draft of the revision calls for a sub-set of MDS section E items for those who are cognitively impaired, and direct questioning with the GDS-5 for those who are cognitively intact.

A second draft of the safeguards revision is expected to be released later this year.

Environmental and rights groups criticized the first draft of the safeguards revision when it was released in 2014.

Some vendors (including Micro Focus, Fujitsu, and IBM) introduced object-oriented syntax based on drafts of the full revision.

TI made substantial contributions to the ideas of the paper, the drafting and the revision of the manuscript.

NK Acquisition of the data Analysis and interpretation of the data Drafting of the manuscript Revisions and corrections.

MS contributed to the ideas, the drafting and the revision of the manuscript.

MB and CR contributed to the drafting and the revision of the manuscript.

LdW wrote the first draft and the revisions of the manuscript.

H: literature review, analysis and interpretation of the studies, drafting of the manuscript; critical revision.