Sentence examples for draft of revisions from inspiring English sources

One change proposed in our partial draft of revisions to the American Bar Association Model Code of Judicial Conduct is to strengthen -- not weaken -- the standard requiring judges to avoid even the appearance of impropriety, by moving a prohibition to a more prominent place in the rule.

SMM contributed to study design, appraisal of the protocol, drafting of revisions and data analysis plan.

JB: conception and design; interpretation of data ST: draft of manuscript; revision of manuscript for important intellectual content.

MM: draft of manuscript; revision of manuscript for important intellectual content.

SKW coordinated the development of subsequent drafts, including incorporation of revisions to each new version.

A second draft of the safeguards revision is expected to be released later this year.

Environmental and rights groups criticized the first draft of the safeguards revision when it was released in 2014.

SY design the study, carried out the acquisition of data, analysis, interpretation of data collected, drafting of manuscript, revision of draft for important intellectual content and give final approval of the version to be published.

RALC contributed with conception, design, acquisition of data, analysis, interpretation of data, draft and revision of the manuscript.

EAB prepared the first draft and revisions of this paper.

JY prepared the first draft and revisions of the paper.