We returned nine drafts for revision (24%).
We returned 11 drafts for revision (30%).
JJMD, AB, and AWH contributed new ideas, and went through the various drafts for revisions.
MJK and GJMWT double-checked the data, contributed new ideas, and went through the various drafts for revisions.
KÖ supervised and participated in the practical work and neutrophil counting, assisted in interpretation of the results and was main responsible for supporting the drafting and for revision of the manuscript.
The second objective has been to draft a proposal for revision of Directive 2001/42/EC based on the criticalities of implementation in individual Member States emerged during the development of the project.
U.S.A.I.D. kept sending parts of it back for revision, draft after draft, weeding out criticism, until the agency finally approved a version for internal use which one member of the team called "a whitewash" of his findings.
CH designed and planned the study, collected and assembled data, supervised analyses, interpreted the results, wrote sections of the initial draft, provided substantive suggestions for revision and critically reviewed later drafts, provided study materials and patients, obtained funding, and provided administrative, technical, and logistical support.
This first draft is usually submitted for revision within three to fourteen days; afterward, a second and sometimes third draft is written.
AM: Interpreted the results; wrote sections of the initial draft; provided substantive suggestions for revision or critically reviewed subsequent iterations of the manuscript; provided administrative, logistical, and technical support.
