Which is why another, less-discussed policy draft focuses on the question of leadership.
In an effort to mitigate law enforcement opposition to the report, which has already delayed its publication, the draft focuses on scientific shortcomings and policy changes that could improve forensics.
Our draft focused on the younger daughter, Scottie – the book had more on her, having been raised with a mother that's a model and a sister that's a model, and needing a woman, and the issues of her body and Matt [the father played by Mr. Clooney] didn't know what to make of that.
Another first draft focused on the applicant's passion for science but never mentioned how he had spent last summer doing original research at a local university.
In this paper, the principal functionalities required to the Mission Control module of marine robots will be drafted, focusing on the design and implementation of a high level control architecture layer.
Writing instruction, in which students are supported by means of extensive tutor response to drafts, focuses on pedagogically important genres in science, particularly the laboratory report and essay.
In your first draft, focus on the quality of the argument, rather than the quality of the prose.
Advocates of a process writing approach to second language writing pedagogy suggest that teachers should focus on content on early drafts before focusing on form on later drafts.
"Gender Bender" was penned by freelance writers Larry and Paul Barber, whose initial draft focused heavily on the contrast between the farming community of the Kindred and a version of city life "with very sexual connotations", influenced by the works of Swiss artist H. R. Giger.
Johannessen's original draft focused more heavily on racial issues, which Fox's broadcast standards office objected to.
