Sentence examples for draft focused from inspiring English sources

Negotiators said that the final weeks of wrangling on the draft focused on a federal committee that will be set up to review the oil contracts.

Our draft focused on the younger daughter, Scottie – the book had more on her, having been raised with a mother that's a model and a sister that's a model, and needing a woman, and the issues of her body and Matt [the father played by Mr. Clooney] didn't know what to make of that.

Johannessen's original draft focused more heavily on racial issues, which Fox's broadcast standards office objected to.

Another first draft focused on the applicant's passion for science but never mentioned how he had spent last summer doing original research at a local university.

"Gender Bender" was penned by freelance writers Larry and Paul Barber, whose initial draft focused heavily on the contrast between the farming community of the Kindred and a version of city life "with very sexual connotations", influenced by the works of Swiss artist H. R. Giger.

Which is why another, less-discussed policy draft focuses on the question of leadership.

In an effort to mitigate law enforcement opposition to the report, which has already delayed its publication, the draft focuses on scientific shortcomings and policy changes that could improve forensics.

Education Week obtained "a draft of the 'Student Digital Privacy and Innovation Act,' which President Obama called for in his speech at the Federal Trade Commission (FTC) on January 12". Benjamin Herold of Education Week wrote in his piece that the draft "focuses primarily on prohibiting targeted and behavioral advertising" and would be enforced by the FTC.

Professor Kang's article draft focuses on the still and motion pictures of Japanese military 'comfort women' captured by army photographers attached to the U.S. Army 164th Signal Photo Corps in China, Burma, and India during World War II.

For example, you can write one entirely new draft focusing on making the narrator more interesting to readers, another draft that hones in on developing the setting of the events, and a third that fleshes out the central romance in the novel.

Writing instruction, in which students are supported by means of extensive tutor response to drafts, focuses on pedagogically important genres in science, particularly the laboratory report and essay.