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… More papers, more discussion, better data, and more satisfactory models – not larger awards of damages – mark the path towards superior understanding of the world around us". – US Chief Justice Frank Easterbrook, Underwager v Salter 22 Fed.
1) This well-argued paper could perhaps be improved somewhat if the very long run-on paragraphs are broken up to allow the reader to follow the discussion better.
I also think the Discussion better integrates different interpretations of the cause of the phenotype, both at the level of the tissue contributions (dorsal epidermis and AS) and of the cellular processes involved (actomyosin contractility and cell-cell adhesion).
Publication in eLife is recommended essentially as is, but the following minor points could be considered while finalizing the manuscript for publication: 1) This well-argued paper could perhaps be improved somewhat if the very long run-on paragraphs are broken up to allow the reader to follow the discussion better.
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As suggested, we have modified the Abstract, Introduction, and Discussion to better explain the significance and novelty of our findings and to integrate them better into the existing knowledge.
The counterargument is that the discussion is better served by clearer words, even if that means pointed debate.
If you're planning a revolution — or just a political discussion group — better not tweet the location.
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