"did in making" is not a correct or commonly used phrase in written English.
It is unclear what you are trying to say with this phrase and it does not convey a clear meaning. It would be better to use a more specific and precise phrase to express your idea.
McNamara succeeded as none of his predecessors did in making the military responsive to civilian direction.
In "Young Man Luther, Erik Eriksonn wrote of rare, historic individuals who succeed, as Luther did, in making their personal ordeals representative for entire populations.
One man said, "What he did in making that turn was the equivilent of getting on a superhighway the wrong way".
I was wondering whether, perversely, you feel more creative freedom in that medium than you did in making your film, although the latter is nominally art, and the commercials are... well, commercials.
(Though such side-by-side occurrences can be troubling, as in the case of a uranium deal involving Russia and a Canadian mining magnate, which Trump mentioned, citing the book "Clinton Cash," as he also did in making other allegations).
This is what G.E. did: In making electrical transformers, it produced 140,000 pounds of PCB's yearly a week, which regularly spilled onto the factory floors and burned the soles right off the workers' rubber boots.
This is done in making use of the general principles of Bond Graphs together with the gramians as analysis tools.
"I wish if people could only just see the work I do in making people happy.
"We have some work to do in making the public access more visible".
But, he added: "There is still more to do in making the list truly representative".
I feel that, and I think that's what we've done in making the film.
