'devotion to making' is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when you want to express a strong commitment to a particular activity, especially one that requires effort or creativity. For example: "She had a great devotion to making beautiful stained glass windows, dedicating many hours to her craft."
But the best callback involves Hoggett's fogeyish devotion to making gates close quietly.
I am deeply touched by this devotion to making it possible for me to shop and consume without restraint.
Always a passionate advocate of what is righteous and ethical, he will be remembered as a strong leader with a devotion to making a difference.
This depiction probably understates Trump's devotion to making money, as well as his racism and nativism, both of which go back decades.
As a result, Mr Asper has brought jobs to the city, as well as being a generous donor to local causes.But there is a more controversial aspect to Mr Asper's devotion to making Winnipeg great again.
Both got their starts as pharmaceutical sales representatives, a notoriously grueling job that — because it demands stamina, charisma and a near devotion to making the sale — has become a crucible for future drug company executives in recent years.
"Having gone to New York City public schools, that quite literally saved my life," he said, "I feel an incredible devotion to make that possible for more kids".
The qualities rewarded there - self-reliance, ambition, single-minded devotion to work - make women unfit for marriage and vice versa.
And I can say that I have never been around a group of individual musicians who showed up to really play with such utter commitment and devotion to music making night after night as Chris [Potter], Antonio [Sánchez] and Ben [ Williams.
"We felt that degree of commitment and devotion had to make a difference, and the shock of what happened in the 1984 elections left us reeling".
The story of Koestler's marriage, of the danger of devotion, seems to make a mockery of his work, where he explored the danger of the human impulse to surrender onself out of loyalty to others.
