"detailed version of" is grammatically correct and can be used in written English.
It is typically used to refer to a more thorough or specific explanation or description of something. Example: "Can you please provide a detailed version of your proposal for the new project?".
Under commission rules, the staff will release a detailed version of the proposal in coming days.
The lyrics did that anyway and a longer, more detailed version of the song would just be redundant.
In the first survey, they repeated a more detailed version of Haidt's query: How did the participants self-identify politically?
A longer more detailed version of this blog post was published in the Addiction journal available here.
The ultimate deadline is the end of June, when a full, comprehensive, detailed version of the settlement is due to be signed.
Colonel Reese appears to have anonymously circulated a less detailed version of his memo on a blog called "The Enchanter's Corner".
Gayle offers a detailed version of meeting Charlotte Edwardes, whose recent interview with him in the Times added to his notoriety.
In fact, the Packers have a more detailed version of their public statements, but it is not available to the union.
Dominating the film, Hoffman plays a theatre director who uses a MacArthur grant to mount a detailed version of his own life, staged on a set of New York built to scale inside a colossal warehouse.
LIPA has hired a consulting firm, Stone & Webster, to coordinate the plan, which a utility spokesman said would be a more detailed version of a plan that already exists.
Mr. Green announced a more detailed version of a housing construction plan, saying the city should spend $5.6 billion, financed in part by revenues from selling city-owned property, to build 150,000 units of low- and middle-class housing.
