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Secondary outcomes to be assessed are stated, but no description of data collection was provided, weakening study strength.
The description of data collection methods were variable; however, a thorough description of the assessment technique for the primary outcome time-to-union is provided.
(See File S1 for more detailed description of data collection, literature search screening procedures, comparison of included studies to previous GWLS meta-analyses, ethnic composition of original GWLS, marker mapping and inclusion procedures, data preprocessing, and procedures for handling missing marker data).
D: Adequate description of data collection methods.
The previously published study [ 12] provided a detailed description of data collection and quality control procedures.
A more detailed description of data collection has been given earlier [ 22].
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There are descriptions of data collection in Methods and results, but these appear inconsistent.
Detailed descriptions of data collection methods have been published previously for the individual studies (29– 36).
As global descriptions of data collection method can obscure underlying mode features, comparative studies should describe these features more fully.
Study reports should better clarify such features rather than rely upon global descriptions of data collection mode.
Detailed descriptions of data collection techniques and protocols for nocturnal PSG and daytime multiple sleep latency testing (MSLT) have been described elsewhere [ 9, 10].
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