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The description of characters is worse, and some of it sounds like casting notes: Coyne's assistant, Danny, has "high, arched, Jack Nicholson eyebrows"; someone's voice has always reminded Jude "of the comic Steven Wright"; another character bears "a passing resemblance to Charlton Heston".
Often, description of characters focuses on hair color or eye color, and these details can help signal to your reader that your character has a certain ethnic background or appearance.
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Evaluation / Assessment: Students will be evaluated based on initial journal response, participation in class discussions, thoughtful completion of partner blueprints, and creation and description of character figures for the entryways to their rooms at home.
8. Avoid detailed descriptions of characters.
On detailed physical descriptions of characters: "Avoid".
8 Avoid detailed descriptions of characters, which Steinbeck covered.
Coe's descriptions of characters slipping uncomprehendingly into poverty are worthy of George Gissing.
Yes, there are copiously detailed descriptions of characters at work -- shearing, delivering, herding sheep.
"It's very disciplined comedy," Ms. Burke added, "even though descriptions of characters may sound really wacky or absurd.
"It is an old-fashioned, almost self-indulgent narrative," Paul Kennedy wrote in the Book Review, "and thus rich in its descriptions of characters, events and landscapes".
Some of the more G-rated references include descriptions of characters "wearing bitterness like a rain poncho," or falling apart "like a puzzle on a paint shaker".
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