Instruct your class that, to provide a more convincing persuasive essay, they should strengthen their appeals with an emotional appeal--pathos.
The Guyton show has been organized by Scott Rothkopf, a 36-year-old Whitney curator who has also written a convincing if overlong catalog essay illuminating this artist's development, and he plotted, in collaboration with Mr. Guyton, a brilliant installation.
According to his own account, Jacobi found Kant's essay much more convincing than Mendelssohn's, though first prize was awarded to the latter.
2. In your opinion, which essay presents the more convincing case?
The personal anecdote and light, jokey manner disguise serious thought and a deeply convincing argument; and the article becomes an essay.
The most convincing reading of the poem as "personal allegory" is George Whalley's essay The Mariner and the Albatross.
In a catalogue essay accompanying Björk's MOMA show, Alex Ross makes a convincing case for placing her in the company of such radical sonic explorers as Stockhausen and Meredith Monk.
The anthology's 91 selections by 77 writers -- a mix of fiction, poetry, essays, journalism and diary entries -- make a convincing claim for Los Angeles as a fertile source of regional writing.
Have a reason, and if it's not good, then improve on it, by using convincing kind of words, making it feel like you're writing a persuasive essay.
