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He became absorbed beyond mere happiness as he felt himself exercising control over living things".
It would be easy, and partly true, to say that what Henry is absorbed by here, what is beyond mere happiness, is power, control over living things.
And then there is the remarkable sentence: "He became absorbed beyond mere happiness as he felt himself exercising control over living things".
Something else is wanted more than happiness by Henry, and it seems to be the exercise of control over living things, one of which is himself.
And then there is the remarkable sentence: "He became absorbed beyond mere happiness as he felt himself exercising control over living things". He feels himself exercising control, but he is not, and his absorption is beyond, in excess of, mere happiness.
He became absorbed beyond mere happiness as he felt himself exercising control over living things". The adult narrator can see Henry as in some way identified with these rudimentary scavengers; and the narrator intimates that without adults the children feel how much is out of control or under-controlled.
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