If the goal was to amp up the fame factor, well Mr. Lochte, consider your efforts an A+ success, collateral damage aside, because everybody knows who you are now.
"Now, Mr. Cruz," I'd say, my tone completely measured, totally mild, "as we consider your efforts to take on a larger and larger role in determining our nation's policies, both foreign and domestic, I'm hoping you can clarify one or two matters that are still a cause for some concern.
All things considered, your university effort, Spooky JayKayElleton, deserves a big red tick.
Think of the best chicken dish you ever ate in a restaurant, prepared by a professional chef -- and then consider your own best effort.
Minor points: While reviewing the manuscript, we have noticed a number of other points given below that you should consider in your efforts to improve the manuscript.
But to truly make an impact, consider taking your efforts a step further.
Serve needs: focus on true needs of others, while creating what you yourself need for your own situation/need: and, when serving you have "deserving" to consider, so your efforts are not wasted on those who don't try to improve or to help others (by passing it on).
Some older miniatures are made with poisonous lead and can be deadly when inhaled or, more likely, dangerous over time to grind at with the filings also being a possible environmental hazard.[1] Consider saving your efforts for newer miniatures from manufacturers that can be relied on not to include lead.
Next time you're thinking of asking for sponsorship for a fun run, consider framing your effort as the beginning of your four-year cycle towards Tokyo 2020.
John, Considering that continuing your efforts to make contact may well annoy the PO--which would not be to your advantage--your department chair's advice wasn't bad.
Consider something like: I appreciate your efforts doing the housework.
