The phrase "concise version" is correct and can be used in written English.
For example: This report contains a concise version of the data collected for the study.
(The paperback "concise version" is 430 pages).
Is there going to be some kind of concise version coming soon? A. Oh, yes.
Under the arrangement, Asahi will close the English-language Asahi Evening News and integrate a more concise version into The Herald Tribune.
A more concise version of the set — limited to 400 copies — was already locked in at $59.98, but the topline was anyone's guess.
The code would be an updated and more concise version of the code for privacy online (PDF) which is used by the Information Commissioner's Office, whom Vaizey is understood to be meeting today to push his proposal.
The minister wants businesses to sign up to an updated and more concise version of the ICO's code of conduct, and then display that in a prominent place on their home page with a link to the code.
She gives you Rebecca Miller, the concise, abridged version.
Nyabinghi music is to reggae what campfire spirituals are to gospel, and the Mystic Revelation of Rastafari, performing on Monday night at the New York Society for Ethical Culture, delivered a concise, presentable version of it.
After Robert Icke's free adaptation of Aeschylus's great trilogy, which has moved from the Almeida into the West End, Rory Mullarkey now offers a concise, three-hour version that makes a good impression on first hearing.
This chapter presents a concise and simplified version of the fundamental physical ideas of how polymer chains behave when they are in close proximity to surfaces.
Recommended reading: The American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language Fourth Edition Roget's 21st Century Thesaurus Third Edition Bartlett's Familiar Quotations Britannica Concise Encyclopedia The Updated Version The Writer's Digest Handbook of Novel Writing.
