'commotion for' is correct and usable in written English.
You can use this phrase to refer to a feeling of excitement or activity around something. For example, "There was a commotion for the new video game release."
It wasn't a commotion for the players.
Camera crews jostled print reporters, causing a commotion, for space.
As I watch, it arches its back, and each layer of the landscape bristles – though 'bristles' is a word of too much commotion for it.
Said Butch Carter, who coyly led the news media outside the team's practice facility while some of his players sneaked by reporters and cameraman: "It was a commotion for you guys.
I keened with Oedipal betrayal, hardening myself against the merciless rejection of women, and turned my gaze to the village where Jones's goat caused a commotion for months on end by breaking into Albert the Devil's parlour to devour a mountain of scrumped apples.
Several onlookers gathered, and a twentysomething parked his new Ford F-150, watched the commotion for a minute, and asked for the scoop.
I headed there for the obligatory dune-driving experience and all our hectic commotion made for a strange contrast with the group of Bedouins that we spotted herding their camels in the far distance.
But despite this commotion, life for many Hondurans has continued as usual.
Mitsubishi's "Start the Commotion" ads for its sporty Eclipse use a song of the same name by a British band called the Wiseguys.
In the interim we'll scurry about trying to make sense of the commotion, looking for a way to understand it and to move forward.
Trainers begin preparing their charges for the commotion of a movie set early, bringing them to crowded places as puppies and letting strangers pet them.
