The sentence is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to someone's or an organization's promise to work towards improving health, either in a physical, mental, or emotional sense. Example: Through her commitment to improving health, Dr. Jane Smith has made tremendous strides in providing access to healthcare to those in need.
Although her studies had not focused on that area, McCoy calls the experience "invaluable" for learning project management and reinforcing her commitment to improving health conditions around the world.
It will stand as part of Clinton's legacy at the State Department, reflecting her long-term commitment to improving health care systems and resolving the AIDS crisis.
I was honored to join GAVI Alliance CEO Julian Lob-Levythethe World Health Organization's Dr. Thomas Cherian, and others at this event in rural Rwanda, and to then meet with Rwandan President Paul Kagame who reiterated his country's commitment to improving health for all its citizens.
"Dr. Lee will be remembered for his intelligence, creativity and extraordinary commitment to improving health around the world.
Desirable personal qualities included strong interpersonal and communication skills, fluency in Spanish and English, ability to learn, dependability, initiative, and passion and commitment to improving health care for underserved patients.
The Government has shown commitment to improving health outcomes, in particular for maternal and child health, and the National Health Strategy emphasizes a better distribution of the health infrastructure, better performance of health workers and facilities in order to increase utilization rates [ 42].
As mentioned previously, there has been a renewed commitment to improving health systems data in developing countries by many of the largest global health agencies [ 55]. Gonzalez Block and Mills suggest that 0.1% of total health care expenditure should be spent on health services and policy research in developing countries [ 86].
Among the health disciplines, public health has a broad interdisciplinary mandate and a commitment to improving health in every aspect of peoples' lives; it is naturally linked to child maltreatment and associated risk factors and is well placed to engage in effective knowledge translation.
The strong government commitment to improving health services and patient satisfaction was further emphasized after the 2003 SARS outbreak, when in 2005 the "Year of Hospital Management Reform" was declared, with the key theme of "the patient comes first, improve the quality of service".
