Sentence examples for comments on the drafts from inspiring English sources

DR: Data collection and comments on the drafts, LD: Data collection and comments on the drafts.

LD, DZM and HW made critical comments on the drafts.

GBL: Data collection and comments on the drafts.

AK: Data collection and comments on the drafts.

LO: Data collection and comments on the drafts.

GS: Data collection and comments on the drafts.

WZ drafted the manuscript; the other authors, in particular DC, provided insight comments on the draft.

YJ drafted the manuscript; the other authors, in particular CA, provided insightful comments on the draft.

HO gave valuable comments on the draft and also polished it.

Alan Dixson provided helpful comments on the draft manuscript.

Carl Schneider, Aston University, for his comments on the draft article.