"comments on how to" is a correct and usable phrase in written English.
You can use it when you want to express that you have advice for a particular task or process. For example: "I have several comments on how to improve the document."
The board has asked for comments on how to improve auditor independence to be submitted by Dec. 14.
The authority said it would hold a hearing in January to gather public comments on how to use that money.
For now, it is soliciting comments on how to update its guidelines and is gathering information about how carbon-offset programs work.
Treasury Department officials, who briefed news reporters on the condition of anonymity after the council's meeting, said the council would be particularly interested in comments on how to treat asset managers who invested money on behalf of others.
And parsing the differences between campaigning on the Web and on the street is the task before the Federal Election Commission, which recently invited comments on how to approach Internet politicking.
As the F.C.C. seeks comments on how to disclose products, Mr. Meyer of Davie Brown said he would not object to a more overt disclosure, but not during the show itself.
Listen to "Midterm Anxieties," Margaret Talbot's Comment on how to scare people into voting for you.
The New Yorker, March 20 , 1937P. 17 Comment on "How to win friends and influence people".
By The New Yorker November 3, 2014 Listen to "Midterm Anxieties," Margaret Talbot's Comment on how to scare people into voting for you.
By F. Cooke and E. B. White The New Yorker, March 20 , 1937P. 17 Comment on "How to win friends and influence people".
Finally, Lyman invited the panelists to comment on how to conduct a job search and earn promotions on the job.
