Chilcot finds that Campbell largely left the task of writing the dossier to Sir John Scarlett, then chairman of the joint intelligence committee, and others – although Campbell did chair a September 2002 meeting at which the need for a "substantial rewrite" was agreed – and later gave a series of comments on drafts, including one urging Scarlett to "cut the rhetoric".
Differentiate comments on drafts from those on final essays.
Thesis Prep Seminar: Students "workshop" their work-in-progress and receive comments on drafts.
"There's lots of drafts and comments on drafts, and they can change until the last possible moment".
We thank M. Liberman for comments on our initial results and F. Jordan and G. Reesink for comments on drafts of this paper.
We thank Tim Wade and Elizabeth Doyle of EPA, and Prof. Dale Hattis of Clark University for their helpful comments on drafts of this manuscript.
He is co-chair of the Cross-Brookings Initiative on Energy and Climate at the Brookings Institution and an unpaid adviser for the WEF ETI team, where he reads and comments on drafts and offers advice on strategy.
We thank Bob Leahey of InfoTrends Research Group Inc., Armando Luna of Blue Cross and Blue Shield of Florida Inc., Emily Sawtell of The McGraw Hill Cos. and Steven Wunker of Innosight LLC for their comments on drafts of this paper.
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HM supported the data gathering and provided comments on drafts.
KO coordinated data collection, was involved in data analysis and provided comments on drafts.
