Sentence examples for comments on draft from inspiring English sources

The attention to both linguistic and physical detail permeates not only the televised episodes of "Once and Again" but the material viewers never see or hear -- the story meetings between producers and writers, the handwritten editorial comments on draft scripts, the stage directions.

Many had submitted a stream of comments on draft Environmental Impact Statements.

We are grateful to Lucy Bates for helpful comments on draft versions of this paper, and Ken Munro for assistance with database queries.

We thank Paul Williams for identification of bumblebee specimens, Birgit Buhleier for sharing and filming our field work, National Geographic for broadcasting our research, and Nigel Raine and four anonymous reviewers for their helpful comments on draft manuscripts.

CSy: Collection of data, comments on draft.

YMC provided comments on draft and helped drafting the manuscript.

HM supported the data gathering and provided comments on drafts.

KO coordinated data collection, was involved in data analysis and provided comments on drafts.

AC-O was involved in data analysis and also provided comments on drafts.

I have tried to mitigate this problem by seeking comments on drafts from various individuals.

Critical comments on drafts of paper.