Sentence examples for comment on a draft from inspiring English sources

In February 2009, NSB sought public comment on a draft report.

For the most part, the document does not reflect industry's wishes, which were conveyed in letters during a period of public comment on a draft last year.

Before publishing its fact sheet, Niosh asked three former players, a representative from the N.F.L. Players Association and a representative from the N.F.L. Player Care Foundation, an independent organization that assists retired players, to review and comment on a draft.

When a government agency prepared a workplace safety fact sheet based on a study of degenerative brain disease in retired N.F.L. players, the organization invited several people to comment on a draft.

Regulators in charge of writing the Volcker Rule, which would ban banks from trading with their own money, were inundated with complaints and suggestions on Monday, the deadline to comment on a draft proposal.

Mr. Jiang was able to raise his concerns about the direction of policy when invited to comment on a draft of the political report that was presented to the congress, two party insiders said.

America's site for rewriting government rules, regulations.gov, displays the comments on a draft bill as a list of the commenters' names.

Thanks to Arvind Narayanan for comments on a draft.

Thanks to the anonymous reviewers and to Jan-Willem Boiten for comments on a draft version.

Thanks to Dr Sally Adams for her comments on a draft of this article.

The RCUK called for comments on a draft policy to require CC-BY, but hasn't yet adopted the policy.