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She kept some of Joseph's work, but layered it with her pop take on life, a cleaner narrative line, and a dose of revenge.
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The narrative is also cleaner and more focused, so that "The Girl Who Played With Fire" feels less like a super-grisly episode of "Murder She Wrote" and more like a Swedish version of "Law & Order" or "Prime Suspect".
The book has everything: great pace, a strong narrative, romance, adventure, danger, monsters and a Jamaican cleaner.
The first thing you will notice about Moore's art is the minutiae: the alphabet beads, tiny toys, coins, buttons, novelty/cartoon eyes, paper flags, miniature plastic soldiers, pipe cleaners, etc. that embellish his subjects and punctuate his narrative.
The first two are relatively conventional narratives, told in the third person and the present tense: "He plays with the vacuum cleaner, tearing up paper and watching the strips fly up the pipe".
My cleaner.
Narrative intensity?
And narrative?
Narrative problem?
Narrative ellipses.
The clamor of strafing echoes through the West Virginia narrative, returning in the rushing cataract of a river in flood, the thunder of a storm, even the roar of a vacuum cleaner.
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