The phrase "becomes more remarkable" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it to describe something that is extraordinary or impressive in some way. For example, "As she matures, her accomplishments become more remarkable."
When you think how stylistically different these three are, the Miamian achievement becomes more remarkable yet.
Instead it was the Orioles who did, in the bottom of the inning, adding one more moment of pure jubilation to a season that becomes more remarkable by the batter.
That achievement only becomes more remarkable when it is taken into account that the wage bill for their playing staff is less than £1m and they average crowds of 4,000 at Huish Park.
This trend becomes more remarkable, and simultaneously, a red shift is observed with increasing the C60 thickness.
In a world where the possible becomes more remarkable and easier everyday, it's always best to have been built only with that new possibility at the core.
The production rate of H2 is higher when water is saturated with argon than air and the beneficial effect of argon becomes more remarkable at higher ultrasonic frequencies.
But in this regard it needs to become more remarkable.
Towards the end of the already remarkable production of Verdi's Simon Boccanegra at the Royal Opera House, things became more remarkable still.
It became more remarkable still when the figures were broken down to reveal that not only was the approval evenly spread across the range of ages but that the gender divide was equally well balanced, with 77% of women and 79% of men in favour.
The behavior became more remarkable, as the interaction parameter χ became larger.
With increased Br and Hr, the corresponding shielding and amplification effects became more remarkable.
