Sentence examples for be improved and clarified from inspiring English sources
Overall, this is an original and interesting work, though some aspects of the manuscript may be improved and clarified.
As a result of these comments, the technology description was improved and updated and the comparator types were clarified, but the recommendations did not change significantly.
Beyond these novel aspects, the SCCP did also summarise central points that still need to be improved or clarified (SCCP, 2007).
The two main ministries that lead the agricultural and rural sectors, MINAGRI and MINRD, have some degree of coordination (mean linkage score = 4.1), but respondents indicated that this could be improved by clarifying roles and responsibilities for each ministry and communicating ongoing reform and change processes.
This article can be improved by clarifying the following minor points in the section Data collection and cell-type classification: 1. Cluster quality It is not clear whether the quality of single units was assessed objectively, for example, by measuring isolation distance.
Yet the model could be improved, by clarifying whether its job is to critique government proposals, or to devise its own.
The use of school closure as a public health response to epidemic disease can be improved by ensuring that officials clarify the goals of closure and tailor closure decisions to those goals.
Disease surveillance and reporting should be improved to better estimate the incidence of S. suis infections and clarify the relative role of the foodborne transmission route.
[another technicality/clarification] Table 4 (comparison of dietary habits) would be improved with a caption or footnote clarifying that a lower score on this assessment indicates improved/more healthy eating habits.
