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There needs to be a hook".
JS: There's gotta be a hook or a chorus or something.
Vallejo said on the subject of her looks: "You have to recognise that beauty can be a hook.
There's commentary on what the visuals are communicating, and the frequent use of direct-address narration feels too much like a fiction writer's device, however much it wants to be a hook.
Every melody seems to be a hook, every last aspect of it has been polished until it catches the light, and the lyric is a kind of 21st-century reboot of Goffin and King's Will You Love Me Tomorrow?
That could certainly be a hook if it becomes active enough.
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There is a hook, however.
In fact, I felt transported, and that was a hook.
An acid house classic; every element is a hook.
Sometimes cynicism is a hook, sometimes the hook is humor, angst, irony, aggression, sex or sincerity.
Naturally, there was a hook to those recruitment ads, as Ms. Prelinger points out.
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