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Still, it wasn't all bad: "Narration appears lifted from a Fodor's guide, as when Langdon pauses in the middle of a life-or-death escape to remember the history of a bridge: 'Today the vendors are mostly goldsmiths and jewelers, but that has not always been the case.
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"Whatever visual poetry the film possesses is overwhelmed by the thuddingly bad and nearly ceaseless narration," Mike Hale wrote in The New York Times in 2009.
But whatever visual poetry the film possesses is overwhelmed by the thuddingly bad and nearly ceaseless narration, written by Ms. Benacerraf and Pierre Seghers.
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The narration enacts the narrator's fate.
"A good prop can help a film's believability," in narration he begins simply, "while a bad one can pull you out of the experience".
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