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Reviewer's follow-up comment based on second version Following the authors' revision of the manuscript and response to comments, I have amended my comments somewhat.

The authors' responsibilities were as follows - AO: initiated the study; BL, SK: collected data; AO, BL, and MJ: data analysis; AO and GC: project supervision; AO, BL, SK and MJ: writing the manuscript; and all authors: revision of the manuscript.

VO performed staining and statistical analyses as well as writing and editing of the manuscript according to all authors revisions.

Reviewer 1 comments: My main concern with the authors' revisions is that they do not adequately address the alternative interpretation of their data proposed by the reviewers in point (2).

After publication of [ 1] we became aware that author revisions had not been incorporated into the final published version.

Editorial support (editing for language/spelling/grammar and consistent style; coordinating manuscript review; incorporating author revisions; formatting tables and figures; fact checking; and assistance with submission) was provided by Dominik Wolf at PAREXEL and was funded by Pfizer Inc.

Reports of randomized controlled trials that do not conform to the CONSORT guidelines may be returned to authors for revision prior to formal review.

All authors: critical revision of the article for important intellectual content.

Most authors consider revision of the prosthesis an end point in its survivorship [ 9].

Other authors: Critical revision of the manuscript for important intellectual content and acquisition of the data.

Manuscript Drafting: all authors; Critical revision of the manuscript for important intellectual content: all authors; Statistical analysis: MVV, VBLT, FG.