The phrase "attention that makes" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing the type of attention that creates a certain effect or outcome.
Example: "The attention that makes a difference in a child's learning experience is often personalized and engaging."
Alternatives: "focus that creates" or "awareness that generates".
After all, it's the responsive, one-to-one, individualized attention that makes all the difference".
It is not what they depict, however, but how they capture and hold your attention that makes the drawings so remarkable.
MIT Sloan's Evan Apfelbaum suggests that it is the shared attention that makes these games so emotionally compelling, especially with the United States Men's National Team making the amazing run out of the group stage.
And it's not a 14-deadbolts-on-the-door type of security, but rather a level of comfort and attention that makes it possible for friends to use the apartment when I'm not there.
But for most aging adults, the authors say, much of what occurs is a gradually widening focus of attention that makes it more difficult to latch onto just one fact, like a name or a telephone number.
Mr. Atkinson, who has worked actively for local charities since retiring, said companies were most likely to support nonprofits in their backyards, and that the Kings helped such causes by getting "the kind of attention that makes Sacramento a lot more interesting for a national company looking for headquarters".
"It attracted the kind of attention that made this happen.
Here we describe recent studies of spatial selective attention that made use of positron emission tomography (PET), functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), and event-related brain potentials (ERPs) to investigate the spatio-temporal dynamics of the attention-related neural activity.
On the basis of this clamor, VocalTec was able to go public, raise lots of money (about $47 million) and attract the kind of attention that made Microsoft copy its software and include it in Windows 98.
In the end, it was the way they handled the attention that made all the difference.
Rediscovering the toughness, skill and defensive attention that made them division winners, the Ducks on Saturday earned the Western Conference's No. 1 seed.
