The phrase "attention in improving" is not correct and may lead to confusion in written English.
It could be used in contexts discussing the focus or effort put into the process of improvement, but it requires rephrasing for clarity.
Example: "We need to direct our attention towards improving our customer service."
Alternatives: "focus on enhancing" or "emphasis on bettering".
Mobile operators have focused their attention in improving the user satisfaction for data services in their networks.
The nitrogen atoms have been attracting enormous attention in improving the fluorescent properties of carbon quantum dots (CQDs), but the contribution varies widely.
These are qualities that have not received full attention in improving health care delivery and saving lives.
With the advancement in cancer treatment, there is increased attention in improving the QoL among the cancer patients.
Ganoderma lucidum has drawn folk's attention in improving health status in which it could ameliorate ailments and lessen diseases risk.
Hence it is imperative to get complete knowledge about the development environment and their aspects before implementing test automation so that teams can divert their attention in improving the quality and not in finding the causes of defects.
PsyCap, as a personal coping resource, should be paid attention to in improving the physical and mental QOL of psychiatrists.
The enhancement of PsyCap could be a new intervention strategy and should be paid attention to in improving HRQOL of psychiatrists.
The results of the aforementioned systematic reviews suggest that cognitive behavioral therapy (CBT) was no better than educational or attention controls in improving fibromyalgia.
In this study, we hypothesized that providing coping strategies for age-related barriers to self-care by phone contact between clinic visits would be superior to attention alone in improving glycemic control in older adults with poorly controlled diabetes.
Particular attention is needed in improving quality control at production level and perhaps the national salt iodation regulations may need to be reviewed.
