The phrase "attention could make" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing the potential impact or influence of attention on a particular outcome or situation.
Example: "In a crowded room, attention could make a significant difference in how well someone is heard."
Alternatives: "focus could create" or "awareness might lead to".
Studio executives asked that the specific city in the United Arab Emirates not be named, saying unwanted media attention could make it difficult for the boys to adjust to their new surroundings and could even complicate efforts to extend their temporary visas there.
Your prompt attention could make a difference between being funded and narrowly losing out.
That plea for attention could make some users too shy to strut their stuff on camera.
But he did jokingly worry that even a smidgeon of press attention could make him the target of conservative talk radio hosts.
Giving these areas a little attention now could make all the difference in their ability to enjoy hard-earned retirements.
More attention to detail could make a quick turn-around here.
Attention from Wood could make or break Leslie's campaign for Pawnee City Council, and not surprisingly, "he's just incredibly cocky," Schur said.
Given the choice to pay attention to what could make her look good, or to what could make her look bad... Amy carefully checks on all her flaws each time she looks in the mirror.
That kind of attention and pressure could make anyone stumble; but certainly, building your identity and learning about the social world while working long hours and being scrutinized doesn't make it any easier.
Immediate attention to preventing such abuse in the health care setting could make a big difference to women's willingness to return for further care.
As an editor, Karl's attention could help make some young writer's career – he certainly helped to make mine – and he showed you right at the start that intellectual integrity was a touchstone he would kill to protect.
