The phrase "attempting to redraw" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing efforts to change or modify something, such as a plan, map, or concept.
Example: "The committee is attempting to redraw the boundaries to better reflect the community's needs."
Alternatives: "trying to revise" or "seeking to alter".
What is interesting about Hall's first two public responses to the green paper to date is that he is attempting to redraw the lines of battle by putting the BBC on the same side as the government.
For now, we simply conclude by urging that academics and practitioners pay greater attention to how these important players are attempting to redraw the boundaries of professional services, and to how law firms, clients, and regulators respond to the potentially disruptive, but still largely unexplored, changes that the Big 4 are bringing to the global legal services market.
His single mother was unable to afford supplies, so he made do with broken pencils and scraps of paper, sometimes attempting to redraw the militant cartoons he saw in Black Panther literature from the early 70s.
In extreme cases, some may attempt to redraw pension contracts to cap their future liabilities.
Charlie Hebdo's cartoons resist religious extremists' attempts to redraw the boundaries of free speech by using violence.
Rupert Neate BAE Systems and EADS attempted to redraw Europe's industrial landscape in 2012 with an audacious but doomed merger, whose consequences will continue to play out in 2013.
The party in control of the majority of seats in the State Legislature has attempted to redraw the lines to weaken the chances of the minority party (gerrymandering).
As separatist rebels attempted to redraw the map of Mali, placing Timbuktu in their breakaway state of Azawad, a debate percolated on Wikipedia during the last week over how to edit the entry on the region.
And they warn that any attempt to redraw Balkan borders would lead to violence and war.
In a previous attempt to redraw boundaries under Cameron major changes were made to the initial plans.
Any attempt to redraw boundaries in the Middle East will exacerbate and amplify the existing conflicts in the area (Iraqi Kurds' leader says redraw boundaries, 23 January).
