The phrase "attempt to revamp" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing efforts to improve or change something significantly, such as a project, system, or product.
Example: "The company made an attempt to revamp its marketing strategy to attract a younger audience."
Alternatives: "effort to overhaul" or "try to redesign".
In an attempt to revamp his lineup, Los Angeles Lakers coach Mike D'Antoni has benched big man Pau Gasol.
The amendments, the government says, represented a long-overdue attempt to revamp a Constitution ratified after a military coup whose 30th anniversary was on Sunday.
Cassar might have cleared out his squad in an attempt to revamp the club, but the worry is that he has failed to replenish adequately.
We've just published a case study that looks at Mike Woronka's attempt to revamp the sales efforts of Action Ambulance, which provides ambulance and transportation services to hospitals, nursing homes, rehabilitation facilities and special-education programs in school systems.
Lindsey Vonn, the four-time overall World Cup champion, has asked the International Ski Federation whether she can enter the men's downhill race in Lake Louise, Alberta, in an attempt to revamp the image of women's Alpine skiing.
ALBIA, Iowa, Nov. 8 — Former President Bill Clinton said Thursday that he should receive more blame than his wife for the failed attempt to revamp the nation's health care system more than a decade ago.
During his visit to the UN in New York, Rouhani attempted to revamp the image of Iran so badly hurt under Ahmadinejad.
People close to Promark fret that any attempts to revamp the unit's pay formulas to reflect in part how the car company performs could make it tougher to attract and keep talent.
MIAMI DOLPHINS -- They are attempting to revamp their offense by trading for quarterback A.J. Feeley and receiver David Boston, but now they need offensive linemen to protect Feeley, especially on the right side of the line.
Attempts to revamp roads and ports have run into chaos all over India, not least because the actual growth of this bustling nation of more than a billion people consistently outstrips even the most perspicacious planner's vision for it.
