The phrase "attempt to perfect" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing efforts to improve or refine something to a higher standard or level of quality.
Example: "The team will make an attempt to perfect the design before the final presentation."
Alternatives: "strive to improve" or "endeavor to enhance".
"It's an excellent point because my desire is always to attempt to perfect my games.
One such refurbishment project is taking place at the Appalachian Fruit Research Station, in West Virginia: an attempt to perfect Luther Burbank's stoneless plum.
What most often starts as an innocent attempt to perfect the dark art of bringing these sugary treats into existence in one's own kitchen evolves into a tiny home business.
So once again we are left with a very strong possibility of these uplifted animals being made to suffer in an attempt to perfect them.
This implies that Google and other leading technology firms will continue to attempt to perfect their tools.
A CT scan confirmed Wildung's findings; Thutmose had added gypsum under the cheeks and eyes in an attempt to perfect his sculpture, Wildung explained.
That is how Thomas Edison described his laborious attempts to perfect the incandescent light bulb.
So said Thomas Edison, the prolific inventor, speaking of his laborious attempts to perfect the incandescent light bulb.
Previous attempts to perfect the technology in Harvard and elsewhere have produced useful models, but have proven to be too fragile or unable to navigate around each other.
Meanwhile, Cuarón and his crew spent many headscratching months attempting to perfect natural-looking lighting and convincing zero-grav floating, building a giant cube to house the actors and using complex animated sequences to programme camera moves.
For months, SpaceX has been attempting to perfect booster technology that could help humans land on bodies with less gravity than earth (such as Mars) and then – most importantly – safely back on Earth.
