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The phrase "attained the effort" is not correct and does not convey a clear meaning in written English.
It seems to be an attempt to express achieving or accomplishing something, but the wording is awkward and unclear.
Example: "After months of hard work, she finally attained the effort needed to complete the project."
Alternatives: "achieved the effort" or "gained the effort".
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Even if it cannot be fully attained, the effort in attempting it is still important.
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