Sentence examples for as we revised from inspiring English sources

As we revised the paper, we have identified a number of places where revisions in the text should make the paper clearer.

We found your comments very helpful as we revised the article.

As we revised the GeDI to target upper-division students, we narrowed the list of subconcepts from 10too six.

"But we stand by every decision we make, the cabinet stands by every decision we make, and as we revise them and improve them in the light of experience we will stand by those, too".

Lawrence Bachorik, a spokesman for the F.D.A., would not directly address the concerns raised by medical officials in New York, saying only, "The F.D.A. will carefully consider the arguments and data presented at the meeting as we revise our guidelines".

As we revise our view of the transcriptome, comparisons between nuclear and cytoplasmic RNA clearly serve to expand our understanding of the expression and regulation of even the best-annotated genes.

As suggested, we revised our conclusions and substantially rewrote parts of the manuscript to discuss our data in the modified interpretation framework.

Using protein sequence alignment of orthologs among fission yeast species as guide, we revised the gene structure annotation of these 27 genes (table 1 and supplementary file S1, Supplementary Material online).

As a result, we revised the measurement design of our effectiveness study.

Quality of written English: Acceptable Authors' response: As indicated above, we revised the manuscript (and its title) to provide a clearer description.

Authors' response: We revised the text as suggested.