The phrase "as the revisions of" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to changes or updates made to a document, project, or piece of work.
Example: "The final report was submitted as the revisions of the initial draft were completed."
Alternatives: "following the updates of" or "in light of the modifications to".
As the revisions of the Fifth show, he looked at his own creations with a merciless eye, slashing away at them as if they were the scribblings of an inept student.
As the revisions of Starbucks' mermaid rendered her bland and asexual, so the revisions of Starbucks itself drained it of whatever local charm could have made its stores into social centres.
APC proposed the study, completed the data analysis and prepared the manuscript as well as the revisions of the manuscript.
Our findings show that Wilson and Cleary [ 12], as well as the revisions of Wilson and Cleary's model proposed by Ferrans et al. [ 13], together are the most frequently referenced in the HRQOL literature, representing nearly a quarter of all of the articles reviewed.
Others include the controversial lifting of a 10-year boycott of the chief minister of Gujerat, imposed after sectarian riots in 2002, as well as the revision of travel advice to Kashmir and an agreement to pursue joint efforts in cybersecurity.
Default reasoning can thus be viewed as the revision of a theory of expectations in manner that naturally relates priorities of default rules to the entrenchment of expectations.
Failure of the surgery was defined as the revision of UKR to TKR due to any cause such as loosening of components, infection, pain or any other indications.
Findings of this work can guide future planning decisions on such as the revision of the ecological-economic zoning and local land use plans.
Within this period, of a number of German environmental regulations were made under his responsibility such as the revision of the Clean Air Act [TA Luft] 2003.
The IEEE 802.15.7r1 Optical Wireless Communications Task Group (TG7r1), also known as the revision of the IEEE 802.15.7 Visible Light Communication standard targeting the commercial usage of visible light communication systems, is of interest in this paper.
Though major changes of explicit authoritarian institutions such as the revision of the Constitution, the election of political leaders and abolition of restriction of civil rights were made, the legacy of authoritarian regime was ingrained in culture and practice of the state apparatus and civil society.
