The phrase "as she evaluates" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when describing a process of assessment or judgment that someone is undertaking.
Example: "As she evaluates the candidates, she takes detailed notes on their qualifications and experiences."
Alternatives: "while she assesses" or "as she reviews".
As she evaluated the data gathered by her device, she realized it was allowing her to detect not only the patients' tracking ability but also restrictions in their eyes' range of motion.
Democratic Sen. Mazie Hirono's voice dripped with disgust as she evaluated how Republicans have treated the woman accusing Supreme Court nominee Brett M. Kavanaugh of sexually assaulting her when they were in high school.
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This feeds back to metacognition, as she evaluated the outcome and perceived it as being useful to her learning.
Recently, a literature review was published by Pritts et al. [87] where she critically appraised the studies that reported on upstaging of sarcoma by morcellation which she evaluated as 'rather poor'.
As part of her internship she evaluated how management styles and organizational structure evolve over the lifetime of a company, and gave recommendations on how sub-organizations could find ways towards better goal alignment.
As she prepares to evaluate five great cities, Nawal el-Moutawakel has multiple roles, multiple loyalties, multiple obstacles, but she looks like she can handle them.
Captained by Commander Geoffrey Layton, her post-completion trials lasted for five months as she was used to evaluate steam power for submarine use.
I supported my current candidate as she designed, implemented, and evaluated three consecutive lessons on stress management for her edTPA portfolio where we both used the "Thinking Behind the Rubrics" as our guide and were confident that no rubric was below a three and that most of them should have earned a four or five.
