The phrase "as she commenced" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used to indicate the beginning of an action or event performed by a female subject.
Example: "As she commenced her speech, the audience fell silent in anticipation."
Alternatives: "as she began" or "as she started".
"What are you doing?" Hugh hissed, as she commenced to eat them.
As she commenced softly but purposefully rubbing the younger woman's flawless shoulders, the spy wondered yet again: how could a master operative (and expert lover) like Jack have spawned an offspring that was so relentlessly inane?
"Do you want to be dramatic, sexy, or bold?" she asked as she commenced her reprogramming session.
Christie Frandsen teared up in the Lanterman Auditorium on Sunday afternoon as she commenced the 2011 La Cañada Girl Scout awards ceremony.
The meeting commences with an ice breaker: "Please share one thing you did last week to rejuvenate". Everyone goes around the room to answer, but as she opens her mouth to share, the rest of the agenda commences.
She commenced working as a solicitor for the Gucci Group (now known as the Kering Group of luxury brands which includes Stella McCartney, Gucci, Saint Laurent, Brioni, Bottega Veneta and Alexander McQueen) in 2011 and was appointed General Counsel for Stella McCartney in 2012.
She commenced her career as an accountant in Washington DC and later moved to New York City.
She then worked as a software developer until 2010, when she commenced her doctoral studies at Northwestern University.
Therefore, she commenced gefitinib (250 mg daily) as third-line therapy in May 2007.
I mean, good God!" to which she commenced to laugh heartily.
As a consequence of this it might be expected that a bee's overall lifespan would be strongly influenced by the age at which she commenced foraging.
