The phrase "as second draft" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to a version of a document or piece of writing that is in its second iteration or revision.
Example: "I have completed the initial version of my essay, and now I am working on it as second draft to improve clarity and coherence."
Alternatives: "in the second version" or "as a revised draft".
Andrew McLaughlin, the administration's deputy CTO, talked about turning the government into a platform that enabled "services at the edge", with Data.gov and Apps.gov as first draft efforts towards this end.
At this time, the Leishmania infantum and L. braziliensis genomes were available as first draft assemblies, without any manual annotation or checking of assembly.
Yet the White House hated Mr Corker's bill as first drafted, saying that it might become a vehicle for senators determined to undermine the nuclear talks.Mr Corker is a fan of transparency.
For instance, in the rules as first drafted, the 120-foot height limit on community facilities like schools, medical centers and cultural institutions in medium-density districts such as R7 would have made it practically impossible to build double-height floors for an auditorium, cafeteria or gymnasium without sacrificing some of the overall floor area allowed on the site.
"The raters who are scoring the students' results were asked to consider these as first drafts.
The sale of storyboards from different films and art pieces meant as first drafts was pretty huge this year.
The letter, as first drafted, calls for a process that is inclusive of all parties in the region, a process that has impact on the daily lives of Palestinians and Israelis, and is not a one-shot deal that ends with this Summit.
On the website Something Else!, Nick DeRiso writes of Harrison's stated regret at Spector's overuse of reverberation on the album, and opines that "[This] stripped-down version of 'Let It Down' best illustrates how so much of Harrison's pent-up songcraft instantly resonated, even as first drafts".
AS and FR conceived the idea; AS and KK performed the analysis, AS and AS completed the first draft; and AS, AS, FR, and KK read the paper for final draft completion.
This version has been described as "the most inexplicable" of the drafts and is sometimes referred to as the "second draft".
