The phrase "as being too severe" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing a judgment or opinion about something that is perceived as excessively harsh or strict.
Example: "The committee criticized the new policy as being too severe for the current situation."
Alternatives: "considered overly harsh" or "viewed as excessively strict."
The reduction in aid budgets, understandable as it may be, has been too severe.
8 animals within this group were culled due to welfare as disease was deemed to be too severe, leaving 6 survivors at the end of the study.
A total of 12 sessions may arguably be too severe as low intensity interventions for anxiety disorders are gradually gaining empirical support [ 62].
It requests the reform of the United Nations Conventions on drugs and other narcotics, as they are considered to be too severe and repressive, in particular for cannabis users.
After 15 min, further symptom scores and readings were made and if the change on acoustic rhinometry was greater than 25% decrease in Amin the challenge was abandoned as the nasal hyper-reactivity was too severe to permit accurate diagnosis.
As soon as he was sentenced, Blackman's wife said it was too severe and she highlighted the mental tension he had been under during the tour.
As these restrictions turned out to be too severe complete equality was dropped in favour of the requirement of equality of the loadings for both groups.
If a more aggressive strategy is to be applied, the target AUC must be selected below 42 mg min ml−1 as toxicity associated with this AUC was too severe, leading to multiorgan dysfunction in one patient.
The outcomes of physical punishment compared unfavorably with alternative disciplinary tactics only when it was the primary disciplinary method or was too severe (such as beating up a child or striking the face or head).
As it turned out, the experiment had been too severe.
